For my revision I rearranged some of the material to try and make a better story. The part about Witness Against Torture got moved in to the middle of the project and part with Joe Lombardo talking about the rally in general got moved to the top. I added more text slides in to the show to give more context. I used more photos as well. The first time around there weren’t enough photos so the slide show moved along too slowly. I spent a lot of time trying to smooth out the audio. I lowered the volume the best I could and put spaces in between the audio section to make it less boisterous.
Here is the original.